问题不少.总体上一般..

我也只是学生.不知道怎么评分..我想就高3来说.中等稍偏差水平吧,因为出了些不该错的问题.it leaves much to be desired.

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标点就不说了.

"emble" should be "emblem"

in the 3rd line,"culture" here ought to be countable, +s

in the 4th line,"sprite" should be "spirit".

in the 5th line,"ideal" is adj, should be "idea".

and "that it likes" should be "it looks like".意思不同的.

"In addition to" should be "In addition" or "additionally"感觉also也可以去掉,意思重复了吧

"there will be growing individuals" 想表达什么意思?.越来越多人?

那应该是"there will be a growing number of individuals".

"please write to me soon" 改为通常的 "i'm looking forward to hearing from u"