(注意：假设2008年是过去时间)

The world wide economic recession in 2008 leaded to a significant decline in the

employment market of fresh graduates in China, and with it, graduates in 2009 would be splashed into the mass of 3 millions of people who were still hunting in 2008. It owes to the promotion of college-enrollment rate as well as an increase of educational institution that the graduates were gluted.The number of college student is increasing sharply ,though, the quality of them is not prompted significantly. In the most part, the lack of working skills causes the lack of proper jobs for graduates in 2008.

注意：

and with it 插入语，与此同时，是不是很地道^o^

splashed into 人被泼洒到……，欧美杂志的形象化用法，非常地道。

It owes to the promotion of college-enrollment rate as well as an increase of educational institution that the graduates were gluted. (这句翻译的自认为很棒，主语从句之后，你看懂了么？^o^)

The number of college student is increasing sharply ,though（把though作为插入语来用很符合欧美媒体认识的用法）, the quality of them ……